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E X O D U S

Now these demons have bound you
and they're dragging you back to hell !

Name- Exodus
Breed- Oldenburg x Hanoverian
Age- Four
Gender- Stallion
Height- 16.3hh
Alliance- Dark
Health- 100%

Winter was quickly approaching Wild Equines and it would not be long before the landscapes would be painted ivory and the days would become shorter and frigid. The earth was already becoming frosted in the morning hours and it took longer for the atmosphere to warm up for the day. Exodus hoped that it was not a sign of a horrendous winter to come but it most likely was. The Oldenburg and Hanoverian blooded beast did not particularly enjoy winter weather but it was a fact of life. It just meant it was another season to splatter with claret and bodily fluids as he exploited other living equines for his murderous needs.

Speaking of his murderous needs, he had a lovely bone to pick with the oddly marked Versai that went by the name of Castell Nedd. The saint had a particularly beautiful maiden and Viatrix had abducted the wench out from under the saint's nose. After the bastard had fractured Viatrix's immaculate frame in a battle, Eurosephyne had become Exodus most latest possession. If he had anything to do with it, she would also stay that way until he was finished with her. And that very reason explained why he was trekking across Wild Equines before the sun rose today. The onyx stained hell hound was not incredibly worried about fighting Castell Nedd. The emerald eyed brute had seen a small sample of what his opponent was capable of and it really was nothing to be frightened over for any amount of time. The four year old had witnessed much more gruesome injuries be sustained in mock fights and trial skirmishes than what the knight had dealt Viatrix.

The bone that needed to be ripped apart between himself and Castell Nedd was in regards to the gold, onyx, and ivory painted minx that Castell Nedd generally held at his side. But now that she had become Exodus' pet, her freedom has become nonexistent as did her rights to what happened to her body. In all honesty, this skirmish was happening solely because Castell was pissed that Exodus had his way with his darling Rose and had potentially impregnated her with his virulent filth. A Versai queen now carrying the brood of a Helkaer supporter? How scandalous!

 'Such mediocre dramatics.'  Exodus relished in the fact that he had Castell in such a mental bind about this but, it really was not that horrific of an event. The ebony brute could have forced the pair to endure a much worse fate. He still could later on down the road of course.  The Helkaer supporter loved it when others despised the very breaths he took in from the air currents. He craved having the largest target painted upon his spine imaginable. It was amusing, in his opinion. Just as this battle was amusing. However, even as entertaining as the thought of it seemed to be now, there were heavy consequences that would strike him if he lost the battle. If the call was made and he was found to be at a lower standing than Castell Nedd, he would have to endure a cleansing attempt performed by the Versai stud. The mere thought caused the beast to grit his enamels and his muscle system to tense up instinctively. Castell Nedd would never be able to get rid of all the vile and putrid behavior he could possibly exhibit.

Exodus tossed his scarred crown as he trotted through the thicket that led up to the battle grounds. In the early morning hours, the faint perfume of decaying blood and rotting forms reached his paper thins as he continued to close in on the hollowed pit designated for spilling blood.  Scantily marble stained limbs carried his lean form down into the hollowed out terrain just as the sun began its lazy journey above the horizon. Light rays trickled down into the blood stained valley to illuminate the battle field. His opponent would be quite intelligent to arrive soon. Exodus was not in the mood to waste the day to wait upon the Versai but, his lust to keep Rose within his possession kept him grounded to the vicinity of where he finally came to a halt.


word count |  704
tags | @lady with castell nedd/wales
music |  it's over when it's over - falling in reverse
notes | sorry about the wait !
battle terms | one week to reply between posts, 2 hits, 1 dodge, no required word count past the normal rules.
purpose | wales is upset that exodus raped eurosephyne so if wales wins, wales gets eurosephyne back and then tries to cleanse exodus of his evil behavior. if exodus wins, he gets to keep eurosephyne and tries to convert wales to the dark alliance.

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It was time for the most important battle of his life. This time it was personal, no one rapes his queen and gets away with it. What kind of mate would he be if he allows his mate to be treated like this? He would be worse than the fuckers who took her in the first place. His first battle to prevent his mate be taken was a lost cause, but this wouldn’t happen again; he would make sure of that. He have adapted to life with just one eye and it was no longer problem for him, Wales was slightly edgy though along his left side since he was now forever blind on this side. He walked towards the battlefield, knowing this place with his remaining eye no longer working, due to the fact he have been here twice. Twice he has fought and twice he has lost to his opponent. Though he was pissed off, and made him weaker than he was before, he didn’t know he would be able to manage this battle, his legs were sore as hell, and it hurt to walk let alone fight, but Wales wouldn’t back down from a fight, he wouldn’t be a coward. Even if it means for him being killed during the fight, he didn’t care.

Finally he made to the battle ground and stood still. His left leg was swollen at the knee which was going to make this battle less straight forward than the last one. Still he was going make the bastard sorry for picking on this versai stallion. He flicked his tassel more being more angry and frustrated. Auds were pinned against his skull, he was different stallion when in a fight, and it was like the only time he was able to let his aggressive side. The ground was hard and possible for icy patches in certain places; Wales wouldn’t make the mistake and make his arthritis worst by slipping and falling. The cold weather was enough to make him hurt, let alone another injury, hazel orb watching the other stallion. He was planning his attacks right, since his own health was going to let him down. Kicks from his hind legs weren’t going to be option, galloping isn’t going to work well here either. So his only options left were to bit anything he can reach, and kick his front legs. With these attacks in mind, he was now ready to get this showdown on the road.

Auds were stilled pinned as he was ready to get this fight started and finished soon as he could. He flicked his tassel more as he was getting really fed up. “You are so going to be sorry for doing this you bastard! I am going to make you sorry for messing with me you’ll see” he threatened and meant it as well. He reared onto his hind legs which were still working ok, and he carefully landed back down, making his right leg go onto the ground first, and he then trotting with limp towards the other stallion. His build was much heavier than his own and Wales knew he would have some problems with this, but it wouldn’t matter to him, he was sticking to his own plan and that wasn’t going to change, he was going to stick with it. Once he was closed enough he half reared not getting to his full potential height, he bared his teeth, along his left side of the stallion’s body, hoping create some kind of wound along his neck, cheek of nose, it didn’t matter to him. Once he executed the attack, he landed back down, leaving a small weak kick behind him, not knowing this would hit anything. As he circle back, tucking his dial into his chest, preparing himself for the stallion’s own attack, this time Rose was going to come back with him and nothing else.

Words - 653
Tagged - @winter with Exodus
Muse - Good
Music - The wanted album
Notes - Good luck

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Name- Castell Nedd/Wales
Breed- Missouri Fox Trotter x Anglo Arabian
Age- Nine Years Old
Gender- Stallion
Height- 17hh
Alliance- Light
Health- 65% [Arthritis in his left knee... Missing left eye... Permanent lameness on his left leg from a shoulder fracture (cause serve pain in the winter)]

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Attacks : ONE | TWO
Dodges : ONE
Attack Damage :
Attack Injuries : ONE: Half reared aiming a bite along Exodus left neck, cheek, nose region. While coming down, he swiftly bucked weakly towards his front legs area.
The agreed terms : one week to reply between posts. wales is upset that exodus raped eurosephyne so if wales wins, wales gets eurosephyne back and then tries to cleanse exodus of his evil behavior. if exodus wins, he gets to keep eurosephyne and tries to convert wales to the dark alliance.

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[Vin and I have agreed to extra time of a week, due to the fact she lost power through a storm]

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E X O D U S

Now these demons have bound you
and they're dragging you back to hell !

Name- Exodus
Breed- Oldenburg x Hanoverian
Age- Four
Gender- Stallion
Height- 16.3hh
Alliance- Dark
Health- 90%

Emerald spheres rolled over the horizon as the beast sought out his opponent. Harks twitched as the wind howled and the distant sound of other equines clashing together in bloodied wars echoed throughout the battlefield. Time seemed to pass slowly the sun trudged across the heavens in slow motion. Anger prickled beneath his ebony hide as Exodus began to grow frustrated. Had Castell Nedd developed cold feet? It would be a certain shame if that had been the case. The young hellion had been looking forward to shredding the tender flesh from the oddly marked Versai's frame and it would be a waste of time and effort if he could no longer do as such. It only meant that he would have to hunt down the Versai another day to seek his vengeance upon the fool that touched Viatrix with harm and sin in mind. As gleeful as the beast was regarding Castell Nedd's disgust for the fact that Exodus had his way with Rose, the destruction of the war-torn angel fueled a good portion of his fire for this fight. Despite the threat that Castell Nedd would imprison him within the Versai lands and try to cleanse his soul, he wasn't worried about that too much. Exodus believed himself to be too strongly bound by evil to ever be cleansed of such behavior and life style. He still held possession of his spine and he would never bow down to such infidels such as the Versai.

Ivory dipped limbs were then lazily stretched out upon the frozen earth beneath the Helkaer supporter as he continued to wait. It would be absolutely pointless to have come all the way here only to have a contracted muscle ruin his chances of winning.  Fortunately it did not take too much longer for his opponent to appear upon the horizon. Castell Nedd was just an inch taller than Exodus but height would not be a factor in this fight. They were pretty much equal in all aspects as far as the ebony beast knew.  He was vaguely aware that Castell was older by a couple years but even then, the Versai would still be in his prime years. However, that had been his assumed impression of Castell Nedd. Now that his rival was limping toward the younger knight, the odds were beginning to dwindle in Castell's favor. Emerald souls focused in on the Versai's fore limb that was swollen and clearly difficult to manage. An invisible brow arched before taunting laughter left Exodus' larynx. "Already injured yourself, Castell Nedd? What a shame, you're making this too easy already." The younger warrior mused with a sly grin as he began to analyze new tactical strategies. He wasn't sure what all of Castell Nedd's physical limitations were but wouldn't it be a shame if he were to take another blow to the already injured limb?

“You are so going to be sorry for doing this you bastard! I am going to make you sorry for messing with me you’ll see." The Versai bellowed but Exodus could only laugh. Did this guy really think that he could really change anything while already injured? "Sure, Castell. I'm sure you'll make me sorry. I'd just like to warn you though; I don't give a fuck." The brute shrugged his blades before his entire being tensed up like a viper preparing to strike. He wasn't here to fool around, he had things to do. The other beast reared before returning to the earth with little dramatics. "Ooh, so scary." Exodus cackled before stalking forward to meet Castell's movements. If the Versai wanted to get up close and personal, Exodus didn't mind to dictate the cameo shot. His opponent then reared again and the ebony hell hound rose up upon his own hind legs while violently slashing his fore knives at Castell's crown, neck, broad chest, and fore limbs. Amongst the violent striking of hooves, the Versai's enamels suddenly became embedded in the muscle stretched taut across Exodus' nape before releasing and reattaching along the skeletal home for his left sphere. A rabid snarl was ripped from his lungs as the Helkaer supporter moved a hind foot forward just enough to tip his weight toward Castell Nedd. With that action, he forced his entire body weight down in the light stud's direction in hopes of crashing down upon the older beast as a heavy shake of his crown tore his crown away from Castell's jaws. Bloody enamel impressions were left in the thin flesh covering his skull and claret trickled down his features as pain swept through his veins.

As soon as his opponent was back on the ground, Exodus did not hesitate to employ his agility to try and beat Castell to the punch. The sixteen point three hand beast charged forward once his knives were planted before rounding upon his opponent in a tight circle. The lack of ample space to maneuver in the circle pulled on a weakened muscle in his right hind piston as he attempted to body slam into the older beast while his jaws were snapping at any bit of flesh he could find.  Exodus eventually found his way back upon solid earth and he side stepped for a moment to give himself a second to prepare for Castell's final attack. All the damage he could do had been done. Their battle had been quickly finished but it was not extremely dramatic or chaotic. Maybe he could find another bone to spear Castell with later and they could find themselves upon the battlefield again.



word count |  953
tags | @lady with castell nedd/wales
music |  it's over when it's over - falling in reverse
notes | none

battle terms | one week to reply between posts, 2 hits, 1 dodge, no required word count past the normal rules.
purpose | wales is upset that exodus raped eurosephyne so if wales wins, wales gets eurosephyne back and then tries to cleanse exodus of his evil behavior. if exodus wins, he gets to keep eurosephyne and tries to convert wales to the dark alliance.

attacks |  one -- reared up and struck at Castell's head, neck, chest, and front legs with his front hooves. two -- body slam into castell's side while trying to bite anything he could potentially get a hold of along castell's top line
dodge | one -- will not use
injuries | deep bite along the left side of his neck and on the left side of his face around his eye, muscle in his right hind leg is sprained

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WALES/CASTELL NEDD

The battle was more personal for the champagne stallion. His herd was targeted twice and twice his members have been taken from him. But his mate is something he wouldn’t take lightly and he was going to make sure this stallion knew that. If he lost then it wouldn’t matter, he would give the stallion more hell than ever, disobeying him and give him some more swift kicks into the mouth. Winter wasn’t the right time for this battle; as if you get badly injured then you would end up dying from it. Death was something Wales’s wasn’t afraid of; he would take it hard on to save his family from this bastard of a creature. Tucking his handsome dial into his chest, to protect his jugular and to make himself bigger, even though his height was his advantage. Auds were pinned as Wales just took the stallion’s hit head on. Not giving a fuck if he loses another eye in the battle, seeing the flint aiming towards his cheek, he allowed it and soon flesh was torn from his cheek, and he felt it burning along his neck as he was hit there as well. Snorting aggressive as the blood was weeping slowly from the wounds which have been created; he didn’t care much as they would scar just like his last one.

Thinking the stallion’s attack was finished he let his guard down, and it was a bad mistake, since the stallion’s flint hit its mark right across Wales right knee. Ivories clenched together as he felt the pain, and it was good leg which wasn’t riddled with arthritis. Forcing himself to ironge the pain, he watched the stallion closely. I need to prevent him knocking me down he thought as he was really sure, this was the stallion’s plan. Wales limped away from the stallion, just in case the attack was going for his limbs again. Entering the battle in low health was stupid idea, but he wanted to get this bastard’s hide in his land and have Eos cleanse his soul from his evil. Maybe in the process he would castrate the fucker, so he wouldn’t be able sire anymore demons, from his wrenching seeds. The stallion was going to make sure that the draft stag wouldn’t hurt anyone else’s mate ever again. The long wait was over as the stallion started to charge, not wanting his shoulder take the impact, knowing his fractured left shoulder would take it as well, he moved slightly and allowed his rib cage to take the beating inside.

Planning the movement was crucial if his counter attack was going to be effective. As the ebony fur was nearer enough, he soon charged his own bodice against the draft build. Wales knew his own body strength wasn’t the same as other, but he wasn’t going to expose his left side for the attacks. His ivories were open, as he twisted his dial around enough, to attempt to tear some flesh from the stallion’s spine. His own spine was being attacked and he felt the burning sensation across his back. Instead of lifting his head to the pain, he aimed a powerful bite along the stallion’s hind legs, hoping to tear some flesh or even make him lame for a while. Swiftly as it happened he moved away, and he looked at his spine for damage, it wasn’t much damage there just a graze. But the stallion hoped he created good amount of damage back towards the stallion, as his own limbs were shaking as he didn’t know how much longer he would be stand on his own four limbs.

Words - 608
Tagged - @winter with Exodus
Muse - Low
Music - None
Notes - I didn't like this post much... It total crap

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Name- Castell Nedd/Wales
Breed- Missouri Fox Trotter x Anglo Arabian
Age- Nine Years Old
Gender- Stallion
Height- 17hh
Alliance- Light
Health- 45% [Arthritis in his left knee... Missing left eye... Permanent lameness on his left leg from a shoulder fracture (cause serve pain in the winter)]

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Attacks : ONE | TWO
Dodges : ONE
Attack Damage : ONE: Small laceration across his right cheek, neck and knee
TWO: Serve bruising around his rib cage... Bite wounds along his spine
Attack Injuries : ONE: Half reared aiming a bite along Exodus left neck, cheek, nose region. While coming down, he swiftly bucked weakly towards his front legs area.
TWO: While Exodus rammed into him, he did the same biting his spine, rump and hind legs.
Dodge Explanation : Wales moved slightly so his shoulder wouldn't get hit
The agreed terms : one week to reply between posts. wales is upset that exodus raped eurosephyne so if wales wins, wales gets eurosephyne back and then tries to cleanse exodus of his evil behavior. if exodus wins, he gets to keep eurosephyne and tries to convert wales to the dark alliance.

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ooc: you've won by default since i didn't post yesterday. i'll post him in castell nedd's lands.

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@winter I thought it was able to be judge, due to the fact he used is attacks and you didn't need to do the dodge? Just confused

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Oh, woops. I can't read my own posts apparently x3 Yeah, it can be judged now.

Post battle breakdown;

Name- Exodus
Breed- Oldenburg x Hanoverian
Age- Four
Gender- Stallion
Height- 16.3hh
Alliance- Dark
Health- 80%

attacks | one -- reared up and struck at Castell's head, neck, chest, and front legs with his front hooves.
two -- body slam into castell's side while trying to bite anything he could potentially get a hold of along castell's top line
dodge | one -- did not use
injuries | deep bite along the left side of his neck and on the left side of his face around his eye, muscle in his right hind leg is sprained, there is a cluster of three deep bite wounds on his flanks that were bleeding heavily.

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This can now be judged @kal, or anyone else that's free to tally.

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I will tally.
Waiting on judge collection: Yes
Judge 1 Collection: COLLECTED
Judge 2 Collection: COLLECTED
Judge 3 Collection: COLLECTED
Tally-ing Scores: doing that right now, internet is on and off so might take me a bit

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Roleplayer & Character: Vin with Exodus
Quality over Quantity: 13,5
Comments:
- Long posts, 700 and 900 words and the quality was great! Posts were very well laid out.
- Well done. Easy to read, easy to follow, descriptive, and not overwhelming.
- For the most part, the posts were on topic and did not seem to ramble. There were some places in where there was a little redundency.
No God Modeling or Power Playing: 14,5
Comments:
- No errors noted.
- No
- Good overall, but her first move, she said he struck at the opponent's skull. Should have been aimed to strike.
Realism of Attack: 14,5
Comments:
- He tried to stay close to his opponet, as horses usually do.
- Realistic.
- Realistic and well thought out attacks.
Attack Compared to Opponent: 13
Comments:
- I found that Vin's attacks were stronger. There was more of a strategy with the attacks aimed for larger and more important pieces of anatomy to cause maximum damage. This is in comparison to Misty's attacks, which didn't seem to target very important parts of the body for the most part.
- Castell Nedd's attack seemed more creative due to his injuries.
- Second attack seemed a little rushed and could have been better thought.
Completion of the Form: 15
Comments:
- Completed.
- No errors noted.
- It was completed.
Spelling and Grammar: 14,5
Comments:
- "most latest" is a double comparison and "try and beat" should be "try to beat".
- No errors noted... I don't think I've ever given a perfect 5 in Grammar and Spelling before. Great job!
- excellent!

Total Score: 85

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Roleplayer & Character: Misty with Castell Nedd (Wales)
Quality over Quantity: 13
Comments:
- The posts were not overwhelming in length and still delivered an adequate amount of descriptive material
- Good. Both posts were 600 words and quality was good for that.
- The posts seemed to stay on topic.
No God Modeling or Power Playing: 14
Comments:
- No errors noted.
- Not saying 'attempting' or 'hoping to cause' injuries, just saying they're kicking at places. Should be stating your trying to aim at places.
- The post says that "he beared his teeth along the side of the stallion's body" then hoped for the severity of the wound, instead of hitting. This is what it read as, however it could be due to grammatical error.
Realism of Attack: 14
Comments:
- Attacks were realistic enough.
- All moves were what a horse normally would do.
- Realistic.
Attack Compared to Opponent: 13,5
Comments:
- Castell Nedd's attacks considered his injuries and seemed more creative in that way.
- I found the attacks to be on the weaker side, but they were still reasonably realistic. Effectiveness might be better achieved with a little more description.
- Great.
Completion of the Form: 15
Comments:
- No errors noted.
- Completed in all posts.
- Completed
Spelling and Grammar: 9
Comments:
- Saw a few mistakes of cut off sentences in there.
- Numerous grammatical errors and a few spelling mistakes. I would highly recommend re-reading posts before submitting them, along with copying and pasting into a word document to utilize the spell/grammar check. Some of the grammar issues do make the posts harder to read.
- "bit instead of bite", "ironge" instead of "ignore", "I need to prevent him from knocking me down he thought" needs a comma. "not wanting his shoulder take" should be "not wanting his shoulder to take". "he bared his teeth, along the left side of the stallion's body" makes no sense since baring his teeth isn't really an attack. Most of the first post was very difficult to read because of grammatical errors and there were multiple errors in the second post as well. The tenses also were iffy in some places.

Total Score: 78,5

CONGRATULATION TO VIN WITH EXODUS

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Man, hoped to win this time nevermind... Now we can get the plotted more.