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Post by Deleted on Nov 19, 2013 22:00:30 GMT -7
Name- Kolohe (Buck) Breed- Shire(1/4) x Arabian(1/4) x Friesian(1/4) x Quarter Horse(1/8) x Mustang(1/8) Age- 4 Gender- Male Height- 17.3 hh Alliance- Dark Health- 100%
Serenity. She was the furthest thing from peace in his life and she was most certainly not living up to her name. He had died years ago, his first corpse deeming useless and unable to suffer any longer over the loss of his and Serenity's first daughter. He hadn't been able to cope. His heart had given out in a tight spasm in the middle of the night and he'd not woken again. It hadn't been until at least a year later that his angelic self had made its' appearance to Serenity, making a deal to sacrifice one of his own family jewels to return and restore her fertility. She would have to win his love back, pull him from his adolescence and his manwhore ways. She'd been doubtful just as he had as well but they had both taken the risk. They might have never found each other had Santino not called on the young buckskin draft to help protect his beaten and battered mother. Kolohe had followed the obsessive mare for weeks on end, keeping his presence a secret as he'd agreed with the young son. But he'd been forced to reveal himself in order to scare off a stalking mountain lion. He'd chased the cat away and Serenity had played coy, acting like it was all his fault. Slowly, she'd opened up to him and his memories had started to return.
Now he was battling the father of the colt that had reunited Buck and Serenity. Clearly, nothing could get in their way, even the blood of her ex, Gino. The buckskin stud laughed at the idea. Did the ebony brute know this part of their history? Did he know that he would be battling the grandson of Typhizar, the very king that Gino had been beta under and one of the rare few that the ebony stud had respected! Could Buck use that against him? Probably. But he wasn't going to play rough or fight dirty. The blood would be shed on the battlefield, not within their souls.
He was fighting for a mare he was still falling in love for all over again. Sure, he understood that he'd promised to spend his life with her but that life had passed. He had struggled over the idea of giving up all other women for this one but it had been an irresistible pull that he had just begun to accept. There was no reason to fight the inevitable. This mare had captured his heart once again and now they were planning a family together in the Helkaer household. She was a powerful, seductive temptress and he didn't doubt that she would hold his heart forever. Now, he was here to battle to protect that chance. He'd sacrifice his life for this woman.
Ebony tipped daggers remained firmly planted on the ground. Tan bodice rippling with muscle, he let out a battle cry to his new nemesis. There had been no hard feelings until now. Now, Gino would have to face this fluffy ball of love!
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Post by Deleted on Nov 22, 2013 21:45:32 GMT -7
--GinoFrom the dark lands of Carnevale Letale came the tall muscular stud, who took his place in front of the buckskin whelp he had challenged. His canter was light and easy, the walk way to flawless for a stallion that stood at approximately eighteen hands. Gino was a serious stag, the kind that everyone tended to keep their distance from. He had his share of issues- inability of creating friendships or relationships, making them last, along with being a prominent eye-candy for some bitch who didn’t want him for sex. That was his latest problem, though his biggest problem was about to end here in this battle. This battle was not to prove a single thing, though it was to regain a certain balance that no longer existed in him. Gino had fallen in love with Serenity many years ago when they were both young; he had been Serenity’s first everything as she was his, though his actions never really summed up to his love for her. She had taught him everything, from the slightest affectionate touch all the way to how to be sincere with words. He had fucked up and lost everything, not only the woman he loved to the ends of the earth but everything that made Gino, Gino.
Despite not being together for three years, the two managed to create another child, Santino. Gino had no fucking idea the kid was his and when he did, he wanted to be a part of his life. Serenity rejected it at once, wanting Gino nowhere near the babe. Lord, that mare wouldn’t fucking have it, she would yell and snap at him for even showing his face! Though after a few supervised visits she let the rope loose and allowed Gino to spend time with his son. In those meetings Serenity also noticed how much Gino changed his violent ways. Gino had been slapped in the face when he realized that Serenity was gone, though Santino was the break in Gino, the babe was the barrier that Gino jumped, proving him to be what Serenity had always wanted…a stag that accepted his responsibilities and most importantly his children. He couldn’t tell you want it was, though the regret and hurt grew, along with his want to making things better. The pair started seeing each other more, talking, spending nights together…and although Serenity would never admit it, something was still there.
His lifeless vibrant gaze burned harshly into the face of the other stallion, emeralds contrasting violently against his charcoal coat. From the looks of it all his coat bore no scars, though a single brush over it could tell the exact opposite. Gino was far from alive, even if he walked and breathed the oxygen that was supplied for him.
”Pleasure”, he hissed in his deep booming tones a sinister smirk taking hold of his handsome facial features. The stud felt nothing toward the buckskin, nothing other than the deep burn of betrayal that was created the day that Ty decided to pay Gino a visit and tell him to basically shut the fuck up and move on. On other terms Gino had appreciated and actually admired Ty on many levels. He had been the only male to ever offer him a hand in life and because of that, Gino would be forever grateful. When things strayed towards the subject of Serenity, everything went to shits. Again, Gino was thrown off the road of being ‘okay’ and that turned into a dangerous rage. ”This will certainly be the end of many things and before anything takes place in these lands I just wanted ta give ya a HUGE fuck you”, he snarled, savoring every word that came out of his mouth. There was a remarkable feeling of satisfaction in him, ” Now back to proper behavior, let the best man win, hm?” came his cold words that lacked honesty. His towers were already flickered down in aggression, moments later his large poll bowed in Bucks direction initiating the battle. In the few seconds it took to bow his crown he had already planned an attack. Buck was only a hand shorter than him and was facing his direction; the distance between the two was roughly about fifteen feet. The attack that would be placed had to be quick, the distance was far enough to get momentum as equally as it was far enough to be predicted. In a blink of an eye the brute was in full motion, tensed hind quarters ripped free as they propelled him towards Buck, the rest of his muscular body fallowing quickly. Ears were sleeked back against his head as it was the first thing that was intended to be used to cause harm. That massive head had two rows of sharp pearls whose intention was to rip through a thick winter coat and severely shred the flesh at the arch of his neck enough to cause difficulty concentrating on anything else. Gino’s intentions didn’t stop there as he did not decrease his speed keeping a full born run straight at him wanting to clash directly into him. If Gino hit him it would cause damage on both sides. He knew he was slightly bigger then Buck making him heavier and using his weight towards his advantage was smart. Gino was not going to settle for, “I will always love you”, that shit could suck it. He wanted that love present with him, not in words, not in another life, he wanted it now.
Name- Gino Breed- Shire x Friesian x Percheron x Thoroughbred x Clydesdale Gender- Male Height- 18 hh Alliance- Dark Health- 100%
Hits & Dodges- Two hits and zero dodges. 5 days to post. Winner gets Serenity played by Secret.
Attacks- Gino’s intention was to go straight for Bucks neck line or a little lower than the nape you could say, tossing his whole weight into him. Hits- zero.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 28, 2013 10:43:38 GMT -7
Occ: The five day posting period that was agreed on has passed.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 28, 2013 20:36:51 GMT -7
Um... the PM I have says 7 days which means I have until tomorrow, 8:45pm. I have another 25ish hours to reply, that is if we aren't counting the additional three days between your original post and then final edit.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 29, 2013 0:03:10 GMT -7
Occ: whoops you're right it's 7 days! sorry i didn't double check the pm! My fault & sure I didn't edit the IC only the occ but whatever floats your boat.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 29, 2013 20:38:11 GMT -7
Name- Kolohe (Buck) Breed- Shire(1/4) x Arabian(1/4) x Friesian(1/4) x Quarter Horse(1/8) x Mustang(1/8) Age- 4 Gender- Male Height- 17.3 hh Alliance- Dark Health- 95%
This was a petty battle, one he had agreed to merely for the fact that he needed to kick this lovesick yearling's ass to get him off his back. Buck didn't have anything better to do so why not? He'd fucked Serenity just a few days ago so there was no rush to get back to her. He could take his time here, enjoy ripping this poor, gutless wench limb from limb. Gino had been a pathetic excuse of a mate and now, he was proving his worth as one; he couldn't even get a girl by choice, he had to force the girl to come with him. Buck hadn't been holding the gorgeous harlot captive. In fact, if anybody had been holding someone else captive it would be her! She'd lured his bachelor soul in, recaptured his love, and made him promise to never leave her side again. These had all been demands that Buck had been more than willing to satisfy. She was insatiable in some categories like her desire for sex and need for babies. He knew that he was barely more than a hot fuck and a baby making machine to her but something about waking up to her slender bodice curled into his every night was a pleasant thought. So here he was, ready to kick some ass to defend what was rightfully his.
”This will certainly be the end of many things and before anything takes place in these lands I just wanted ta give ya a HUGE fuck you!" Ebony lips parted in a smile, a lighthearted chuckle escaping his gullet. I appreciate the kind sentiments, my dear. An invisible brow quirked towards the ebony stud, wondering just how long this would go on. When Buck won, would Gino continue to pester the two lovebirds over this or would they let bygones be bygones? Was the ebony stag mature enough to give more than a dick's shake at that option? ”Now back to proper behavior, let the best man win, hm?” That would be a no... Clearly Gino had no manners, no more pleasantries to exchange, and they would be back to business. Typhizar, Kolohe's grandfather on his mother's side, had taught Kolo how to battle quickly and efficiently. He was going to follow in his grandfather's undefeated footsteps. As ebony daggers thundered over the ground towards him, Buck braced for impact. In an attempt to keep all four feet firmly planted on the ground so as not to expose his vulnerable undercarriage, he tucked his head into his chest, turning just slightly at the last second. Ivories tore at the base of his crest, a good chunk of bloody mane pulled from its' roots with accompanying flesh by the opposing stud. His ink-dipped foredaggers barely managed to keep their grounding, coming off the ground by no more than a couple inches with the impact. Skid marks followed his hind quarters as his body was forced to slide backwards. Buck knew this was the time to pull an attack. Just after the impact of the jet black bodice and the burning of the bottom of his nape that now lay somewhere on the battlefield, Buck forced his chest into the brute, attempting to lift the muscular form off balance. As he did so, he reached around the thick facade of the ebony brute, ivories reaching to tear at the vulnerable areas under Gino's chin and nape. This would be a bloody battle and Buck wanted to end it sooner rather than later. He could already feel the warm fluid of his own blood dripping down either side of his withers as his front legs lifted off the ground to ruin the brute's sense of equilibrium during his attack.
Attacks used: 1- attempted to lift Gino's front end off the ground to bite at the underside of his neck. Wounds: The base of his mane and some skin has been ripped off. He is bleeding but it is not life threatening.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 5, 2013 22:08:43 GMT -7
--GinoGino didn’t give a damn about Buck; with or without him in the picture, he still saw Serenity. He saw her everywhere and honestly it got to the point where he could not leave his lands anymore. Every time he did, pop, there was Serenity. Gino always knew that Buck was there, but Buck had no clue that Gino was still a huge part in Serenity’s life, now did he? Things were complicated between Gino and Serenity and if word got out about their ‘complications’, the tales of infidelity, betrayal and heartache would too much for Serenity to handle. When feelings were kept at bay, everything was fine. Though, as time went by, the feelings came back just as the riddle described: “When a fire is not put out properly, small flames remain”. Those flames caught strength and now both were thrown into a dilemma. The last time they had both seen each other, many things had been admitted. One of them had been that Gino had not tried hard enough to get her back. This battle was the last thing left on his list and only he and Serenity knew why it was the last.
Gino felt his razors penetrate deep into the tender top layer of the male’s mane line; it only took seconds for the bitter metallic taste to fill every one of his senses. Some of the deep maroon sap fell upon the side of his face and mouth, blending remarkably with the charcoal color of his coat. His opponent skidded back on his hoofs, dislodging the earth with a fresh wound. Gino didn’t hold his guard down, the game had just begun. Striking emeralds almost laughed at Buck when he charged at him, hind pillars crouched down as both bodies collided roughly. The impact meant to throw Gino off balance was successful, his front two daggers lifted slightly off the ground though his crown was tossed off to Buck’s right side in attempts to protect his sensitive neck.
Unfortunately not everything could be saved and the bite went past his chin, landing harshly upon the smooth under line of his jowl just before his throat line. The sting that the bite created infuriated Gino, never had Gino allowed anyone to touch his face in any way or form. By the feel of it, there went his damn face. Ivories clenched tightly in his jaw, rippling the fine muscles off his face. The action pumped blood quickly to his wounded, his blood vessels allowing the blood to trickle down the grove of his neck quicker. Bitch, he not only fucked his girl, but now fucked up his face? Just as Buck recoiled from his attack, Gino was already on the move to make his second one. The brute continued to lead his body to Buck’s right side; the move was intended to push Buck further away from him by bumping his own weight into him. As front two pistons landed on the ground beside Buck, Gino whipped the rest of his bodice violently towards him. Crouched hind pillars ejected a powerful buck intended to strike at the other stallions head down to the upper forearm area. The movement was too quick to have any sort of direct landing, but missing was not on Gino’s agenda.
Name- Gino Breed- Shire x Friesian x Percheron x Thoroughbred x Clydesdale Gender- Male Height- 18 hh Alliance- Dark Health- 85%
Hits & Dodges- Two hits and zero dodges. 7 days to post. Winner gets Serenity played by Secret.
Hits: Gino attempts to shove Buck to his right side in order to have room to whip his body around and buck aiming for either his head or any part in that area up to the lower elbow. Where specifically is up to Scoot.
Health: Large bite on the lower part of his jowl, mild bleeding.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 10, 2013 21:50:17 GMT -7
Name- Kolohe (Buck) Breed- Shire(1/4) x Arabian(1/4) x Friesian(1/4) x Quarter Horse(1/8) x Mustang(1/8) Age- 4 Gender- Male Height- 17.3 hh Alliance- Dark Health-80% The maroon fluid leaked from his ebony kissers as he tore at the tender skin of the undercarriage of his enemy's facade. The metallic taste was overwhelming, fueling his desire to finish this stud off for the worthless whore that he was. Buck was young and yet he was willing to commit to this mare for life, AGAIN! He didn't need to be reincarnated a second time to realize that him and Serenity were meant to be. Gino's life force leaving a bitter taste in his mouth was just a reminder of how hard Buck needed to fight now in order to make this work. He had given up other women and he was going to pummel this stud into the ground for screwing Serenity's mind up as her mate so many years ago. The midnight hued stud needed a good beating. Maybe then he would be able to think with more than just his dick.
His tanned shoulders rippled under a fresh river of blood as he stumbled to the side. Gino and Buck were well matched as they both held the thickness of their draft ancestors and the athletic abilities of their finer lineage. Buck had more of a wild look while Gino remained well trained and almost composed in his gait and bodice. This didn't aid either of them as looks didn't come in handy when battling another, but their agility was so perfectly matched, their last hits happened almost simultaneously. The buckskin stud stumbled sideways over the scars his hind daggers had left upon the earth's surface at their first collision. Gino shoved him away and with that, Buck used the momentum to swing his bod around to remain semi-parallel to the black stallion in an attempt to protect as much of his body as possible.
With the sway of force, he aimed his hind daggers towards the towering black brute. As he did so, he turned his crown to get a good look at the impact of his hind quarters on his foe's body. This was his mistake. His aim should have been sacrificed for the safety of his face but Buck didn't think about that part. A strong kick planted itself right over Buck's hazel eye, the frog of the hoof over his winced ocular. He could feel it slice at the tender skin directly under his eye as his head was forced to swing in the opposite direction. The punch was hard enough to send Buck stumbling, but not without some reverberating blows. His original aim to kick out at the stud was satisfied. Strong ebony pillars lashed out at the solid stud in rapid fire, hoping to land a couple kicks somewhere along the cage of his opponent. Buck stumbled forward, head reeling from the blow as he tried to focus his vision on the ground before him. It was everything he could do to keep himself from stumbling into a dizzy heap but he was not going to give up. This would be the final blow for both of them. It had been a fast and intense battle between titans over a love they both had lost but that Buck had regained, and rightfully so. Did the stud that had betrayed Serenity, used her, abused her, and treated her so poorly she had questioned her own worth, deserve her? Or did the stud that made her feel like a queen get his real second chance at love after being forced away from her by death?
Attacks used: 1- attempted to lift Gino's front end off the ground to bite at the underside of his neck, 2- kicked with his back legs at Gino's body as he stumbled away with the head injury. Wounds: 1- The base of his mane and some skin has been ripped off. He is bleeding but it is not life threatening. 2- he has a cut under his eye that is bleeding down his cheek and a bruise will form over that side of his face. Not sure if Racer wants to post one more time to state where the hit landed and make the post count even or just call it quits and have it judged. It's up to her.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 13, 2013 11:54:26 GMT -7
Nope. Its alright. We played with no dodges so this could be judged.
Name- Gino Breed- Shire x Friesian x Percheron x Thoroughbred x Clydesdale Gender- Male Height- 18 hh Alliance- Dark Health- 75%
Hits & Dodges- Two hits and zero dodges. 7 days to post. Winner gets Serenity played by Secret.
Hits: 1) Gino runs straight at Buck slamming his weight into him, snapping at his neck. 2)Gino attempts to shove Buck to his right side in order to have room to whip his body around and buck aiming for either his head or any part in that area up to the lower elbow. Where specifically is up to Scoot.
Health: 75% 1)Large bite on the lower part of his jowl, mild bleeding.2)As Gino turned back around a single hoof slammed into his upper ribcage area, slicing through the flesh leaving a wound. Will bruise over.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 16, 2013 20:44:40 GMT -7
I will tally. Waiting on judge collection: no Judge 1 Collection: collected! Judge 2 Collection: collected! Judge 3 Collection: collected! Tally-ing Scores: done!
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Post by Deleted on Dec 19, 2013 12:19:29 GMT -7
Roleplayer & Character: Scoot with BuckQuality over Quantity: 11.5 Comments: Boring to read, but very evenly paced. It was a little too informal. Better sentence structure would have helped, maybe explaining things better. No God Modeling or Power Playing: 14.5 Comments: Mild one in this phrase, "Buck forced his chest into the brute" when it should have been "Buck intended to force his chest into the brute" or something of that sort.Very careful not to power play. She made sure she said "attempted" instead of saying her character actually did damage. Realism of Attack: 15 Comments:All attacks will found to be realistic. When two horses ram together fighting, they usually go after each other's necks and chins, trying to tear at whatever. Very realistic. Attack Compared to Opponent: 11.5 Comments: First attack was not wel ldescribed, second attack was well described. Attacks were a little confusing and could have been described more. The attacks were good, but it felt like they were rushed, and quickly thought up. Completion of the Form: 15 Comments: All complete. Spelling and Grammar: 13.5 Comments: Exclamation point where a question mark should be. Mild spelling and grammar errors and choppy sentences. Spelling was great, but grammar could use some working. Could say her charries name more than 'he'. TOTAL POINTS: 81 Roleplayer & Character: Racer with GinoQuality over Quantity: 12.5 Comments: One judge said the post where very boring to read. Another said they where interesting. I saw a few sentences that could have been structured better, but other than that, great. No God Modeling or Power Playing: 15 Comments: He didn't say Gino was injuring, but said what his intentions were. No power playing here. Also, he made sure not to god mod, showing that the full run attack would hurt on both sides. Realism of Attack: 15 Comments: He made an attack that he admitted would hurt both sides(hitting full force). Overall just realistic. Attack Compared to Opponent: 13.5 Comments: First attack believeable; second attack wordy and not that descriptive .The attacks were easier to understand than the opponents, but still could have been described in more detail. I feel like Gino's attacks were more thought-out and well typed. Completion of the Form: 15 Comments: Completed Spelling and Grammar: 12.5 Comments: To used instead of too; comma instead of semicolon; "his lifeless, vibrant eye" makes no sense; misspelled following. Mild spelling and grammar errors. In the second post, "Buck was only a hand shorter than him" should have been "an inch shorter than him." Great use of grammar in just the right places, and spelling was perfect. TOTAL POINTS: 83.5 Congrats to Racer with Gino!
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