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Post by fleabittengray on Dec 30, 2013 8:18:51 GMT -7
It has gotten a little warmer out, just warm enough for the snow to melt slightly and turn into slippery sleet. The clouds are dark gray and ominous and the wind has picked up speed. The ice has not melted, so gladiators have to move carefully. It's more slippery than before. Unlike round one, posts are now 1000 words or less. Be careful not to go over the limit as points will be deducted. Two posts per person. Make sure you fill out the battle form and include all injuries from the first battle. Failure to do so will result in points being deducted. Three days to reply. If you lose two battles you are out.
@horsehuggr will post first with Skindred followed by @phantasm with Romeo
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Post by Deleted on Dec 30, 2013 9:32:27 GMT -7
The sun had finally begun to break through the mass of clouds overhead. It provided the tiniest bits of warmth to the battlegrounds but it didn't do much for her wide open wounds. Her withers and nape held a burning sensation and rivulets of crimson continued to pour from her injuries. Every time she inhaled a cold breath of air it made her wince not only from her stinging lungs but also due to her severely bruised ribcage. A mild snort was expelled from her nostrils merely out of frustration. Skindred wasn't accustomed to the tournament style and it sure was proving difficult for her to adjust. Her front pistons were already beginning to scab over where they had been lacerated and her chest had already begun to bruise. Her ebony tendrils smacked against her flanks as she moved forward, being careful to watch her step on the slippery topography. Unfortunately the sun had melted the snow but had made the ice even more slick then earlier. Her auditories were pinned backward and tucked beneath her thick mane; this was partly out of habit but also to protect them from becoming a target. Skindred had caught wind of who her next opponent would be and she wasn't necessarily nervous. It would be interesting seeing what Romeo had planned and although she and her mate were allies with him she would put that behind her. She would envision him as the rapist who had attacked her daughter; her anger that stemmed from that would fuel her through this battle.
The wind whipped her tresses around her facade in wild disarray as she entered the arena. Her eyes were narrowed to avoid the cutting breeze, but they still watered due to the freezing temperature. Seventeen point two hand frame was held taunt beneath her. Her teeth were gritted as she stood poised but it was hard to ignore her injuries while the cold assailed them. She kept her breathing calm and focused as she let her lavender occuli scan the terrain. It would be one hell of a mess trying to maneuver on these grounds, but she would do the best with what she had. Finally her eyes landed on her opponent and not even an invisible brow was arched in acknowledgment. This would be a dirty fight, she could feel it in her bones. But she wouldn't give up. She would be damned if she lost again; there was too much on the line right now! A fore dagger lashed forward, digging into the ice as she pawed the ground. Skindred moved forward then like a bull charging a matador. Her hind hooves fought to find traction and she slipped but just barely caught herself. She righted herself and got her hind end beneath her before she lurched. Her nape extended and her ivories bared as she aimed for Romeo's withers. Her hooves also slid beneath her and she used her momentum to try to slam into the behemoth's side. If she could manage to do so she planned on smacking her forelimbs into his ribs and behind his left fore piston. If the attack proved successful she would hopefully bruise his elbow and ribcage, but most importantly she wanted to get a good chunk of his neck and mane. Her bared ivories greedily searched for flesh and she continued to swing her front legs and hooves, aiming for any sensitive area she could reach. Skindred didn't care what she hit so long as she hit her mark and at the moment she was using Romeo to keep herself upright on the ice beneath her. When her front hooves touched back down she backed up slowly, being careful not to fall. If he were to attack her right now it would be difficult for her to dodge it, but she was prepared. She would take whatever it was he had to bring to the table regardless of whether he took a few chunks out of her or not.
Name• Skindred Age• 6 years Gender• Mare Height• 17.2 hands Alliance• Dark Mental Health• 100% Physical Health• 80% Hits• oo1. Skindred snapped at Romeo's neck in hopes of ripping a good chunk of his mane and skin. oo2. While sliding on the ice Skindred used her momentum to collide with Romeo and then swung her fore pistons in an attempt to hit his ribcage and left elbow numerous times. She also snapped at his neck again before landing. Dodges• None Injuries• oo1. Wolf successfully sliced into both of her front legs, lacerating them deeply and causing her wounds to bleed immediately. oo2. Wolf successfully kicked Skindred in the chest, causing her skin to purple and bruise immediately. As the skin swells it will make it more difficult for her to move without experiencing pain. oo3. While dodging a hit to her back she suffered a tough hit to her ribs causing them to be severely bruised and extremely sore. oo4. Wolf's teeth successfully ripped out a large chunk of her neck next to her withers and he also got a hold of part of her mane. The wound bled immediately and will continue to bleed until it scabs over. Tagged• @phantasm with Romeo Notes• Ahhh I'm sooo nervous lol Word Count• 995. Status• Complete.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 30, 2013 22:52:19 GMT -7
ROMEO, "Back off, I'll take you on. Headstrong, I'll take on anyone." Defeat. It felt like acid in his stomach, burning him from the inside out. He was a warrior, exposed both to victory and loss, but it didn't make losing any easier, especially when he had lost to Xiomar. A low, guttural growl rumbled forth from deep within his throat at the thought of the neutral stallion whom he had just fought in the last portion of the gladiator tournament. It was humiliating to lose, but even more so to lose to an equine of a lesser race. Perhaps he had been a little too cocky with his approach to the last battle, but he knew now to analyze the situation strategically before he made a move. If there was anything that he had learned from the battle with Xiomar other than humiliation, it was the fact that he was not invincible. In fact, he was far from it, but he would be damned if he let anyone else recognize the fact that he acknowledged he could be knocked down a peg or two. After all, he didn't want to ruin his reputation as the Helkaer Commander. His luminescent eyes landed upon the slightly taller mare known as Skindred as she regarded him without emotion. He snorted, expelling the contents of his sinuses carelessly on to the tundra beneath him, returning the expressionless scrutiny that she gave to him. This battle between him and Skindred was sure to be an interesting one considering the alliance he had formed with her mate, Baron. In a normal situation, he would have been forced to respect the rules that came with the forming of an alliance, thus he would have been unable to pick a fight with Skindred or anyone that resided within Terrizel Beleza, but this was not a normal situation. In fact, this was the first tournament that had taken place within Wild Equines and the rules of alliance did not apply here. In this icy arena, Skindred might as well be a stranger for all good the shield of the alliance would do for her, and he had no choice but to fight her unless he wished to forfeit the battle.
He did not waste any words on the mahogany mare and instead cast his gaze from her to the lead-gray skies above as the fierce wind whipped the matted tendrils of his raven-black mane across his scarred face. He blinked in an effort to block out some of the wind and quickly tipped his chin down toward his chest as he shook his mane back across his muscular shoulders and took a step forward to test the surface of the icy arena. Instantly, he slipped, and he slid across the slowly melting snow, trying to find traction on the treacherous ice underneath. His muscles rippled as he fought to keep his balance and he winced slightly as the deep gash on his left fore appendage split open and oozed warm blood that dripped down on to the churned up snow, staining the snow red in several different places. The pain that flashed from his wound surged through his body and shot into the bone of his jaw, indicating that the wound may cause lameness issues later on. Great, that was all he needed, to start the tournament off with a gimp leg and a wounded ego.
It was then that he felt the full force of Skindred's weight slam into him and he went down on his knees, sliding backwards as her momentum carried them a few feet backward. Romeo quickly fought to regain her balance as he did his best to keep his face out of the reach of snapping teeth and flailing daggers, but it was to no avail. In the next instant, he felt her teeth latch on to the base of his nape. He snarled in protest as he wrenched his neck away from her in an effort to take her leverage away from her, but as he did so he felt a chunk of his skin and his mane rip away. The pain from the newly inflicted wound seared through his entity and blinded him for a second with its intensity before he recovered and he snapped at her face in an effort to drive her backward. He scrambled to his feet ungracefully, irritated at the lack of traction due to the ice underneath the melting snow and he stood, spread-legged with his head lowered and his murderous gaze fixated on the slowly retreating form of his adversary. He took a deep breath and winced, only just realizing that she had, in the midst of the collision, managed to hit him in the ribs. Gingerly, he took a step forward, careful not to allow his feet to slide out from underneath him as he tested himself to see what the wounds had done, and he instantly sucked in a breath at the pain that shot through his ribs. It was evident that in a short amount of time his ribs would be bruised and he would be forced to work around the injury, but he was thankful that nothing appeared to be broken.
Romeo moved forward cautiously, fully aware that she would see the attack coming, and launched forward as he got within striking distance with the intent of causing her to lose her balance and potentially knocking her to the ground. He did not fight against his loss of balance as he slammed to the ground, but instead snapped out at her repetitively in an attempt to connect with any part of her that he could. His lethal hooves struck out in an attempt to connect with her legs and potentially keep her from regaining her balance if she had slammed to the ground, a snarl or rage ripping forth from his throat as he flung his head forward hoping to connect with hers and make her disorientated. This battle was shaping up to be very interesting.
Name• Romeo/Rigor Mortis Age• 11 years Gender• Stallion Height• 17hh Alliance• Dark Mental Health• 100% Physical Health• 80% Hits• oo1. Romeo snapped at her face when she slammed into him in an attempt to drive her backward. oo2. Romeo regained his footing and moved forward cautiously until he was within striking distance and then he launched toward her and let his loss of footing carry him forward in an attempt to knock her down to the icy ground. oo3. Romeo snapped out at her several times in an attempt to connect with any area of her face or neck. 004. Romeo didn't try to regain his footing this time, but instead struck out at her legs in an attempt to keep her from regaining her footing if his collision was successful. If the collision was not successful then he is striking out at her legs in yet another attempt to bring her down to the ground. oo5. He flung his head forward in an attempt to connect with hers and possibly disorientate her.
Injuries• Xiomar managed to connect with his left fore appendage in the previous battle and split open the flesh and some of the muscle, making it bleed instantly and possibly causing lameness issues in the future. As of now, it is tender and painful, but he can still manage to walk on it as long as he keeps the injury in mind.
Skindred collided into him and sent him down to his knees again, sending pain from the injury that Xiomar inflicted on him to spread throughout his entire body and sending him sliding backward a couple of feet. She managed to latch on to the base of his nape and when he ripped his neck away from her she took a chunk of his skin and mane with her. When he regained his balance, he took a deep breath and realized that sometime during the collision, Skindred had connected with his ribs and that they are painful and will begin to bruise almost immediately, but nothing is broken as far as he can tell. He will have to move carefully around this otherwise it will limit his movements and make him at a disadvantage.
(charra) - Romeo (muse) - Great (music) - none (tagged) - @horsehuggr (words) - 999 (notes) - eeeeeee, so am I! omg, i about died when i saw who i was up against. xD
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Post by Deleted on Dec 31, 2013 8:51:16 GMT -7
It wasn't about the glory or the fame. Skindred was doing this for her herd and for her family. She was physically putting herself into harms way in order to ensure her herd would be safe. She was tired of others messing with what was hers and was taking the necessary precautions to prevent it from happening again. The breeze was howling in her ears and causing her tresses to rip around her face, occasionally obscuring her vision. Her lavender occuli were fixated on Romeo and it seemed like everything was moving in slow motion when he fell to his knees. Her bared ivories were lashing out repeatedly, searching for skin anywhere she could find it. Briefly she felt the taste of his blood in her mouth and her hooves made solid contact with his body but it didn't last for long. Her harks flattened tighter against her poll when she saw his teeth coming for her, but she couldn't move her face in time. She felt the skin on her left cheek rip and a snarl erupted from her chapped labrums. She ripped her skull away from the behemoth and backed up quickly, though the rushed movement made her hind end slip beneath her. She fought for traction and ended up in a half sitting position on the ice. She struggled to gain her footing and while she was distracted she didn't see Romeo's attack coming. His body collided with hers and the air was temporarily knocked out of her lungs. She was extremely disoriented from the contact and all she felt was the searing pain as his teeth connected with her neck, just narrowly missing her jugular. The flesh hung wide open and instantly crimson flowed from the wound.
Skindred blinked her eyes rapidly to stay focused and was just barely able to see his hooves aimed at her front pistons. Instantly she flung her body upward almost in an embrace and used Romeo's body to keep her upright on the ice. Her bared ivories were aimed at his harks and poll as she snapped aggressively; not only was she aiming at his ears but at his eyes as well. The mare was blood thirsty and her instinct to survive had kicked in. Skindred wrenched her skull backward when Romeo attempted to smack his head into hers and she responded with aiming her teeth again at his face. When she pulled back she released her grip on him with her hooves and instead aimed them at his nose in hopes of fracturing it. When her hooves landed back on the ice she was able to break it a bit with her weight and had gained some decent traction. She then backed up slowly, her mouth open as she inhaled large breaths of the cold air. She was dizzy from the loss of blood but a minuscule voice in the back of her mind told her to keep going. Her lavender occuli were focused on Romeo, anticipating his next move. She snorted a few times as the blood from her cheek wound had flowed down into her nostrils. The harsh temperature was stinging her injuries but she wouldn't stop. She wasn't a quitter! Her bruised ribs caused her to wince with each breath and her nostrils spewed blood when she snorted; Romeo was one hell of an adversary.
Name• Skindred Age• 6 years Gender• Mare Height• 17.2 hands Alliance• Dark Mental Health• 100% Physical Health• 70% Hits• oo1. Skindred snapped at Romeo's neck in hopes of ripping a good chunk of his mane and skin. oo2. While sliding on the ice Skindred used her momentum to collide with Romeo and then swung her fore pistons in an attempt to hit his ribcage and left elbow numerous times. She also snapped at his neck again before landing. oo3. While Romeo lashed out at her front legs she reared and embraced his body. While using him to support herself she snapped aggressively at his ears in hopes of tearing them and also tried to snap at his eyes. oo4. When Romeo tried to collide his head with hers she pulled back and snapped at his face again in hopes of ripping the skin. oo5. Before landing she aimed her front hooves at his nose in hopes of hitting and fracturing it. Dodges• oo1. She reared when he lashed out at her front legs and embraced his body, using it to keep herself upright on the ice. oo2. Wrenched her face back when Romeo attempted to collide his head with hers. Injuries• oo1. Lacerations on her front pistons. oo2. Severely bruised chest and the skin has purpled there. oo3. Tough hit to her ribs making them extremely sore with each stride. oo4. Missing a large chunk of her neck and mane by her withers. The bleeding has slowed but the wound hurts mercilessly. oo5. Romeo successfully ripped a large piece of skin from her cheek. oo6. Romeo painfully collided with Skindred making her lose her breath and making her disoriented. oo7. Romeo ripped a chunk of her neck out, just narrowly missing her jugular. The flesh is hanging and the wound is bleeding profusely. Tagged• @phantasm with Romeo Word Count• 1000. Status• Complete.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 31, 2013 13:36:51 GMT -7
ROMEO, "Back off, I'll take you on. Headstrong, I'll take on anyone."
He could feel the thick sheet of ice break underneath his crushing weight as he slammed on to the ground. He snarled ferociously, trying to drive away the blinding pain that threatened to immobilize him. He sucked in a lungful of bitterly cold air in an attempt to clear away the pain as he shifted his shoulder slightly to move off of a jagged shard of ice that broke the skin of his shoulder and tore into the muscle underneath. A ferocious snarl pushed forth from deep within his throat and from in between his bloodied lips as he felt the weight of Skindred pressing down on him. He knew that he was at a disadvantage at this point and that he would have to be careful of his next couple of moves or risk serious injury. Instinct kicked and he quickly dropped his head down against his well-muscled chest and used the broken ice underneath him to gain a little bit of leverage where he could scramble to his knees and keep the snapping teeth of his adversary from latching on to his throat or damaging his eyes.
Her putrid breath was hot against his face as she continued to dive in and reach for any part of his face and ears that she could. He realized that by moving to protect his face that he left his ears exposed and that they were at risk of being seriously damaged so he did his best to pin them to his skull, but it was a little bit too late. A flash of white-hot pain radiated through his body as he felt Skindred's teeth catch the tip of his right ear and sink into the thin skin with the intent to rip it. Romeo had no choice but to fling his head back up and try to catch her under the jaw to get her to release her hold but when he did he felt her release his ear and instead snap for his face. Counting on his reflexes, Romeo snaked his head slightly to the side and down to avoid any serious contact, but even then he felt her teeth sink into the flesh beside his right eye and break the skin. He could feel her teeth as they tore through the flesh and he managed to lift himself to his feet after she moved backward.
As he stood there within the broken ice, he shook his head and sent splatters of blood from the wound above his eye on to his chest and the ground near him. All around him the icy arena floor was churned up and bloodied, the blood from both him and Skindred. He took a moment to assess the situation, his pale gaze blinded by the crimson blood that flowed into his eyes. He gave an impatient toss of his head again in an effort to clear his vision and it was a couple seconds later when he could see the brief glittering of broken artifacts that laid nestled in the snow, exposed from their hidden sanctuary by the chaos that had erupted here within the arena within the last half hour. Returning his attention back to the bloodied bay mare, the Helkaer Commander let his lips peel back to expose his blood-stained teeth in an arrogant smile. He did not speak, but instead let his actions speak for him as his eyes gleamed with malicious intention.
The wind bit into him and seared his wounds with icy fingers of relentlessness as he tried to come up with a game plan. He mulled over his next course of action with a practical mind even though he wanted nothing more than to launch straight into another attack. If he wanted to ensure that he would walk away the victor then he needed to do something that would be totally unexpected - but safe - that would put him ahead. He knew that an attack straight from the front would be predictable, thus he would have to move off to the side and slightly from the back if he wanted to use the ice to his advantage. He knew, as well as anyone, that ice was dangerous at best, and that if she moved too quickly to counter his movements she could potentially slip and cause an injury that would be much worse. A low chuckle rumbled forth from deep within his throat and he pricked his ears, feeling the blood ooze from the missing tip of his right ear. His eyes stung from both the pain and the fierce wind, but he could still see that Skindred was hurt as well, and that she was bleeding profusely. Her mahogany pelt was saturated with blood and when she snorted, she sprayed out intangible carbon dioxide and bloodied foam. It didn't take an intelligent equine to understand that they were both tired and wounded from the battle that transpired - and it wasn't even done yet.
With this, he moved forward, fueled by the howling of the impatient wind, and he didn't move to make his attack until he was slightly behind her and to the left side. He then lurched forward, trying to gain traction of the slippery arena floor, and managed to find traction only to lurch sideways again. Frustrated, he rose on to his hind legs and struck out at her with his teeth and front hooves in a series of aggressive blows, aiming for her left shoulder and neck in an attempt to rip open the flesh and cause muscle wounds that could potentially hinder her movements. His teeth snapped out at the sensitive flesh of her jugular vein as his momentum carried him into her. He knew that this was do or die and that, with the alliance cast aside, he had to fight - and fight dirty - in order to leave the arena victorious. He needed this win. He needed to rise above and fight for all Helkaers.
Name• Romeo/Rigor Mortis Age• 11 years Gender• Stallion Height• 17hh Alliance• Dark Mental Health• 100%; Physical Health• 73% Hits• oo1. Romeo successfully collided with her and caused her to become extremely disorientated. oo2. Romeo successfully bit into the flesh of her neck and narrowly missed her jugular vein. Her flesh is wide open and blood is flowing from it. oo3. Romeo flung his head upward when she tried to bite his eyes and come for his nose in n attempt to catch her under the chin and keep her from connecting, thus, this being an attack it will also work as a dodge as well. (read below) oo4. Romeo connected with her left cheek and ripped open the skin. oo5. Romeo moved slightly behind her and angled toward her left shoulder before he lurched forward and rose on his hindquarters to strike out with a series of aggressive blows at her shoulder and neck, hoping to rip her skin and cause some kind of muscle damage. oo6. Romeo is aiming at her jugular vein during the attempted battery on her left shoulder/neck with the intent to try to sink his teeth in and attempt to break it open.
Dodges• oo1. Romeo ducked his head to protect his eyes and his throat from the attack that Skindred made. 002. He realized he left his ears exposed and after she sank her teeth in, he flung his head upward in an attempt to connect with the bottom of her jaw and make her let go. (read above, as it counts as an attack as well)
Injuries• oo1. Xiomar managed to connect with his left fore appendage in the previous battle and split open the flesh and some of the muscle, making it bleed instantly and possibly causing lameness issues in the future. As of now, it is tender and painful, but he can still manage to walk on it as long as he keeps the injury in mind. oo2.Skindred collided into him and sent him down to his knees again, sending pain from the injury that Xiomar inflicted on him to spread throughout his entire body and sending him sliding backward a couple of feet. oo3. She managed to latch on to the base of his nape and when he ripped his neck away from her she took a chunk of his skin and mane with her. oo4. When he regained his balance, he took a deep breath and realized that sometime during the collision, Skindred had connected with his ribs and that they are painful and will begin to bruise almost immediately, but nothing is broken as far as he can tell. He will have to move carefully around this otherwise it will limit his movements and make him at a disadvantage. oo5. Skindred bit into his right ear and ripped the tip of it off, causing it to bleed profusely. oo6. Skindred's teeth bit into the flesh right above his right eye and caused a two-inch gash that is cut open and bleeding.
(charra) - Romeo (muse) - Great (music) - None (tagged) - @horsehuggr (words) - 1,000 (notes) - Finished.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 31, 2013 16:44:11 GMT -7
Name• Skindred Age• 6 years Gender• Mare Height• 17.2 hands Alliance• Dark Mental Health• 100% Physical Health• 63% Hits• oo1. Skindred snapped at Romeo's neck in hopes of ripping a good chunk of his mane and skin. oo2. While sliding on the ice Skindred used her momentum to collide with Romeo and then swung her fore pistons in an attempt to hit his ribcage and left elbow numerous times. She also snapped at his neck again before landing. oo3. While Romeo lashed out at her front legs she reared and embraced his body. While using him to support herself she snapped aggressively at his ears in hopes of tearing them and also tried to snap at his eyes. oo4. When Romeo tried to collide his head with hers she pulled back and snapped at his face again in hopes of ripping the skin. oo5. Before landing she aimed her front hooves at his nose in hopes of hitting and fracturing it. Dodges• oo1. She reared when he lashed out at her front legs and embraced his body, using it to keep herself upright on the ice. oo2. Wrenched her face back when Romeo attempted to collide his head with hers. oo3. Skindred shuffled to her right to avoid Romeo's teeth sinking directly into her jugular, instead they ripped off another piece of skin on her neck which started bleeding profusely. Injuries• oo1. Lacerations on her front pistons. oo2. Severely bruised chest and the skin has purpled there. oo3. Tough hit to her ribs making them extremely sore with each stride. oo4. Missing a large chunk of her neck and mane by her withers. The bleeding has slowed but the wound hurts mercilessly. oo5. Romeo successfully ripped a large piece of skin from her cheek. oo6. Romeo painfully collided with Skindred making her lose her breath and making her disoriented. oo7. Romeo ripped a chunk of her neck out, just narrowly missing her jugular. The flesh is hanging and the wound is bleeding profusely. oo8. Romeo's hooves successfully cut into her left shoulder and her neck. They also ripped her previous neck wound by her withers, splitting the skin even further and causing it to bleed profusely. oo9. Although Skindred shuffled to her right a step to dodge Romeo's direct hit to her jugular his teeth still made contact and ripped a large chunk of her neck. Tagged• @phantasm with Romeo Status• This can now be judged! Good luck Phanners, I really enjoyed rping with you (:
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Post by fleabittengray on Jan 1, 2014 18:14:43 GMT -7
Skindred (@horsehuggr)
Battle Form Completed Each Time: 10 Comments: Completed No Powerplaying/Godmodding: 10 Comments: None 1000 Words Or Less: 10 Comments: First post under 1000; second post under 1000 Correct Setting: 10 Comments: Ice and sleet mentioned in first post; Skindred slid during her attack Realistic Attacks: 9.5 Comments: First attack could have been described better Realistic Dodges: 10 Comments: Dodge in second post fit well with the battle; Realistic Injuries: 10 Comments: Previous injuries mentioned; new injuries mentioned Spelling/Grammar: 9 Comments: Sentence fragments; missing commas; Total Score: 78.5
Romeo (@phantasm)
Battle Form Completed Each Time: 10 Comments: Completed No Powerplaying/Godmodding: 10 Comments: None 1000 Words Or Less: 10 Comments: First post under 1000 words; second post 1000 words Correct Setting: 10 Comments: Melted snow and ice described Realistic Attacks: 9.5 Comments: First attack could have been described better; Realistic Dodges: 10 Comments: None used Realistic Injuries: 10 Comments: Previous injuries mentioned; new injuries mention Spelling/Grammar: 8.5 Comments: Unneeded commas; typing her instead of he; you just wrote "kicked" instead of "kicked in" Total Score:78
This battle was SO CLOSE! Congratulations to HH with Skindred! Since this is Romeo's second defeat, he is out of the rest of the tournament.
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