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Post by Deleted on Jan 15, 2015 15:36:44 GMT -7
Gladiator Tournament Round 3 USE the same form, in the same way as in Round 1 (you can go to posts in round 1 to find it) <- important to read the form over from round 1 to freshen your memories.
THREE days to reply, 2 replies per person. Gladiator Style = you do not have to wait for the opponent to show up, he is already in the ring and person that goes first can start attacking in post number 1. You need to make sure you have the surroundings and weather conditions right through out your post
SURROUNDINGS & WEATHER CONDITIONS - The temperature is still around 0°C (32 F / I am hoping that is right, using a converter for this). The dark clouds are creeping it and are now almost over the gladiator tournament ring. The ground is slippery since the snow has been kicked up so much and is almost gone. It's time for the contestants to watch out or they are in the risk of braking some bones if they land badly on the ice.
@misty with Gaeafu will go first followed by ❅ Icy Dragon ✩ with Zana's Rose.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 16, 2015 21:21:56 GMT -7
Name- Gaeafu Breed- Swedish Warmblood x Lustino Age- 7yrs Gender- XY Height- 17hh Alliance- Dark Health- 100% mentally | 80% Physically Past injuriesRound 1. 1. Nose bleeding form a kick in the jaw. Small laceration and bruiser under his bottom lip, be painful to eat for five days. 2. Laceration across his left side of his ribcage and the skin/muscles are bruised 3. Pulled a muscle in his left hindleg from a sudden move for a attack 4. Zana ripped hair from his mane, and where she ripped is now painful to touch 5. Zana managed to hit his chest with her hooves, skin is hanging losely and moderately bleeding. Round 2. (1) Left shoulder is sore from the first attack he done (2) Lactation on his neck area, took some skin off, bleeding is moderated. Gaeafu Round three in the tournament and the stallion couldn’t believe he won a battle. True the palomino stallion that he was fighting forfeit, he hated winning this way. But he couldn’t do anything about it now. His jaw was no longer sore from the first battle. The fact he got beaten by a girl really pissed him off. Still that was gone from his system now and he was able to focus more on the fight at end. Suddenly it was here and he snorted loudly as the ring wasn’t safe like before. Gaeafu wasn’t afraid, but he wasn’t stupid either to risk an injury. He walked into the arena early, and he noticed the ground wasn’t covered in snow now; in fact ice patches were in its place. He looked around and saw there was little bit of cover for one charge attack, but he knew most of the attacks are going to have to be head on. He hoped his opponent would take the blow vs blow, as his agility was useless here now. Cream auds watched and waited for his partner to come into the ring as he was eager to get this battle under the way now.
Suddenly he saw his partner coming towards the ring; he narrowed his blue orbs and noticed it was the same equine he fought before. He pawed the slippery surface with flint and showing he was getting pissed again. Blood was rushing through his veins, as he saw the smaller mare again. Her ebony pelt wasn’t to be mistaken within a hurry, he noticed her bodice was getting scared and she was going to have some more off him. He snorted some more, and light mist was seen, as the temperature have dropped to zero and Gaeafu body was freezing like mad. “Hello again sweetheart, we meet again”, he spoke to a charming like voice and he was thinking how to attack her. The ground was making it hard for him decide, he noticed where the shiny parts were and he flicked his tassel again, he was going to go for it. He tucked his dial into his nape again, showing off he was strong and tough, that she was sorry for being with him. Extending his long limbs, he masked his pain in his shoulder the best he could, not wanting to show his weakness towards her. Using his height advantage and when he got closed to her, he reared up tricking her a little.
Gaeafu the landed back down and aimed to bite at her neck or shoulder on the right side, hoping to latched onto her skin more, and take lot more chunk out of her bodice, to leave a nasty gaping hole. Gaeafu was fighting head on this time, he let go from his back and turned around kicked out, hoping to catch her jaw, chest or her forelegs. He didn’t care where he hit, as this time he wasn’t going to play nice or even make a same mistake as before.
Status Complete Word Count 506 Attacks/Hits 1. Tricked with a rear hoping catch Zana off guard, while coming down on all fours, he aimed to bite her neck, holding onto the flesh, hoping to create a gaping hole. 2. Turned around and kicked out, hoping to hit her face, chest or forelegs Dodges None Injuries in this round None Personal Note He is second one in my log ❅ Icy Dragon ✩ | @birna Wins/losses/ties/buy 01/01/00/00
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Post by ❅ Icy Dragon ✩ on Jan 19, 2015 21:21:18 GMT -7
Name- Zana's Rose Breed- Arabian Age- Six Years Gender- Mare Height- 14.3 Alliance- Neutral Health- 100% Mental - 61% Physical Past injuries Round One:1 - She was bit on the neck, it is a moderate laceration that is bleeding. Will take a few weeks to heal over properly. It is likely to scar. 2 - She was bit on the rump, not as deep as the neck, but it's definitely going to be sore for a few weeks. 3 - Scrape across her chest, very light bleeding. 4 - His teeth scraped across her left cheek, tearing some of the skin off and leaving a rather large laceration. Bleeding quite a bit. 5 - She was bit on her right hock, taking some skin off and it will leave her lame for a week or two. Rount Two: Second Post: 1- A bite to her neck that has ripped some of her mane out as well as some flesh. It will bleed moderately and will take a few weeks to heal properly. Scarring is expected of the area and her mane will grow back thinly there. This Post: 2- Due to Quantum's kick, her last few ribs will have bone bruising (inside layer of bone is fractured) that will take several months to heal completely due to the inner bone not healing as fast as if it were the outside fractured. Severe pain will be caused by this accompanying fast movement or turning. There is a small laceration where his hoof connected that is only slightly bleeding, but the area will bruise and be sore. The ebony mare sucked in the deepest breath she dared to take. Pain bit sharply into her side, causing her to tense up and the breath to get caught in her throat. She had determined that the kick to her ribs had been the worst injury so far and was the one most worth protecting. Any further damage to the area could result in a lethal blow and the tournament was not something that she was willing to die for. Whatever little fame and glory she had acquired from her meager three rounds in, she wouldn't mind giving up if it meant that she could just go home. The sound of sleeping next to her colt in the protection of her herd sounded a lot sweeter than constantly battling in the arena. The amount of fighting was starting to wear on the girl's stamina and she found that she was starting to get tired. She would never give up, but a break would be nice. A break would have been especially nice for this round, as the ground had become very slippery. When the mare had taken her first few steps out, she had noticed right away that it had become treacherous very quickly. There were a few snowy spots, but the ground was mostly ice. To make matters worse, she had noticed that the dark clouds had grown very close to the arena. She was sure that they had been farther away during her first fight, which meant that by the next fight they would probably be directly overhead. Rain on top of ice sounded like a particularly lethal combination, especially when the temperature still felt like it was around freezing. It didn't take long for the mare to spot her opponent and she recognized the brute immediately. It was the massive stallion that she had won against in the first round. He only seemed to have a few small injuries besides the ones she had given him. The mare was glad that he decided to make the first move, it meant the less distance she had to move on her bad hind leg. She hoped that the stallion wouldn't notice just how hurt she was. It would become very dangerous if he knew her weaknesses. Her opponent spoke, but the mare nearly missed it because her own thoughts were much louder. She snorted in response, hoping it wasn't a question. She was the type to get straight to the action, so she braced herself as the stallion approached her. She tried to arrange her balance so she'd be able to move, but she changed her mind when he reared. She decided it'd be better to stay in place and take his attack instead of risk slipping in an attempt to get away. The mare moved her head to the side, expecting for the stallion's hooves to come down. Instead, she became the smallest bit confused when he came back down without slamming his hooves into her. The confusion went away very quickly when she noticed the flash of his teeth and felt the immediate pain in her neck. She cried out sharply and tried to step back, though her hooves had trouble finding a hold in the ground. The skin where the stallion had held onto was torn clean from her neck and the blood had already begun trickling from the wound down her coat. She hardly had a moment to collect herself from the stun of the pain before her opponent already turned and his hind hooves had lashed out. One hoof struck her cheek, while the other scraped across her neck. The attack was enough to get the mare's head back into the game and she forced herself to take a step towards the stallion along his left side. She knew she had injured him on this side before, so she hoped that it would slow him down from any sudden movements. As his hooves were reconnecting to the ground, she tried to take a bite at his hock. She wanted to get a nice, deep hold of it to render the stallion immobilized or at least give him a nasty limp. The mare's game had become far more defensive with the more injuries she had received. To immobilized her opponents seemed to be the best way to save her own skin. Status Complete Word Count 736 WE Word Counter Attacks/Hits 1- Tried to bite at his left hock. Dodges none Injuries in this round1- Gaping bite in her neck, will bleed and be sore for weeks. 2- Bruise on her cheek as well as scrape on her neck. Personal Note LOGWins/losses/ties/buy 2 Win - 0 Loss - 0 Tie - 0 Buy Tagged @birna, @misty
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Post by Deleted on Jan 20, 2015 12:47:37 GMT -7
Name- Gaeafu Breed- Swedish Warmblood x Lustino Age- 7yrs Gender- XY Height- 17hh Alliance- Dark Health- 100% mentally | 70% Physically Past injuriesRound 1. 1. Nose bleeding form a kick in the jaw. Small laceration and bruiser under his bottom lip, be painful to eat for five days. 2. Laceration across his left side of his ribcage and the skin/muscles are bruised 3. Pulled a muscle in his left hindleg from a sudden move for a attack 4. Zana ripped hair from his mane, and where she ripped is now painful to touch 5. Zana managed to hit his chest with her hooves, skin is hanging losely and moderately bleeding. Round 2. (1) Left shoulder is sore from the first attack he done (2) Lactation on his neck area, took some skin off, bleeding is moderated. Gaeafu Gaeafu snorted happily that his attack plan worked and he watched her closely. The rain was starting to fall and made his pelt soaking wet from it as well. The air was freezing let alone the rain soaking his pelt more. He shivered slightly and mist came through after he snorted some more. Blood dripped from his muzzle from his attack, and his auds pinned against his skull more. A dark side of him was coming out now, and he watched her own attack. Suddenly the mare struck at his hocks, Gaeafu didn’t expect this attack from her, and he squealed loudly as her ivories attacked his sensitive hocks and ripped the tendons on that hock. Defensively he kicked out, trying to get her off, and he hoped that his flint on his right hoof, would hit her eye or part of her face at least. Once he felt her attack leave, he looked around and saw his left hock was moderately bleeding from her attack. He tried to put the foot down on the floor but he was unable to as it stung like bitch. He saw that this fucker wanted to make him vulnerable and unable to move anymore, he would make her pay for that.
Gaeafu watched her more now as he was thinking of another attack. Being on three legs now he was stuck, he wasn’t sure he could last another battle with this injury. The terrine was slippery and he was finding it hard to walk on the ice, without risking another injury to his remaining three working legs. Still his height advantage would work best here, and thought of two more powerful attacks, and his ivories were still able to be used. Slowly he limped towards the ebony mare and headed towards her face to face. Soon he was able now he struck out with ivories and attacked her head region, he aimed for her remaining ear, hoping to tear it of or even grabbed some of her forelock, rip her hair out from the roots making it painful and scruffy like appearance. Gaeafu wasn’t finished yet though with his attack and he lowered his dial downwards and attacked her forelegs this time, he knew this was risky, as he could get a nasty kick in the jaw, and even at risk of a fracture jaw. Still he went to attack her at her knees and hoping to give her a nasty bite along the bones, hoping to give her lameness like she did with him.
Gaeafu figure he could get one more attack in, even though it would make his own body exposed to another attack, he went along her side where her ribs were, and he nipped at her the skin there, hoping to cut it or even pinched it enough to create a nasty looking bruise. Gaeafu slowly limped away after he did his attack, and by doing so he slipped a little, but was lucky not to cause himself an injury.
Status Complete Word Count 504 on WE Counter Attacks/Hits 1. Tricked with a rear hoping catch Zana off guard, while coming down on all fours, he aimed to bite her neck, holding onto the flesh, hoping to create a gaping hole. 2. Turned around and kicked out, hoping to hit her face, chest or forelegs 3. While being bitten, he kicked out with his right foot, hoping to hit her eye or other part of her face 4. Using his height advantage he aimed a bite towards her ear hoping to tear it off, if this failed he hoped to rip some forelock hairs from their roots. 5. Risky attack towards her forelegs, hoping to lame her by biting her knees 6. Final attack along her ribs, pinching the skin hoping to cut the skin or create a nasty bruise Dodges None Injuries in this round 1. Bite along his left hock, left him severely lame on that leg, unable to put any weight on it for at four days. Personal Note He is second one in my log ❅ Icy Dragon ✩ | @birna Wins/losses/ties/buy 01/01/00/00
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Post by ❅ Icy Dragon ✩ on Jan 23, 2015 12:37:58 GMT -7
Name- Zana's Rose Breed- Arabian Age- Six Years Gender- Mare Height- 14.3 Alliance- Neutral Health- 100% Mental - 57% Physical Past injuries Round One: 1 - She was bit on the neck, it is a moderate laceration that is bleeding. Will take a few weeks to heal over properly. It is likely to scar. 2 - She was bit on the rump, not as deep as the neck, but it's definitely going to be sore for a few weeks. 3 - Scrape across her chest, very light bleeding. 4 - His teeth scraped across her left cheek, tearing some of the skin off and leaving a rather large laceration. Bleeding quite a bit. 5 - She was bit on her right hock, taking some skin off and it will leave her lame for a week or two. Round Two: 1- A bite to her neck that has ripped some of her mane out as well as some flesh. It will bleed moderately and will take a few weeks to heal properly. Scarring is expected of the area and her mane will grow back thinly there. 2- Due to Quantum's kick, her last few ribs will have bone bruising (inside layer of bone is fractured) that will take several months to heal completely due to the inner bone not healing as fast as if it were the outside fractured. Severe pain will be caused by this accompanying fast movement or turning. There is a small laceration where his hoof connected that is only slightly bleeding, but the area will bruise and be sore.
When Zana felt her teeth sink into her opponent's hock, she knew she only had a small time before he could react to it. She didn't want to finish her attack before she could bite hard enough to do enough damage, so she was slow to release him and his right hoof clipped the side of her head. It took scraped some skin off from above her eye and the mare winced in pain as she pulled her head back. The heat and pain of the scrape was nothing compared to the rest of her injuries, so she only focused on it as she felt the blood begin to trickle down along the side of her eye. Irritated, she tossed her head to try to rid herself of the blood. However, she didn't have too much time to fuss over it before her opponent began limping back. She felt smug as she saw the effects of her attack, glad to see it had caused some damage. The stallion's limping approach gave her time to assess his next attack and she pulled her head out of the way as he tried to bite at her ear. His teeth scraped along her forehead and she felt some of her forelock pulled, but she knew the scrape wouldn't do much damage. She grew annoyed, her remaining good ear was not something that she wanted to lose and it was getting on her nerves that everyone wanted to rip it off. She tried not to linger on the thought for too long, as the stallion then dove his head down to bite at her knees. The girl snorted and raised her knee up quickly, trying to give the stallion a good hit against his jaw. She remembered in the first round that she had kicked his jaw, so she hoped that if her knee hit, it'd hurt like a real bitch. It would be considered payback for his little attempt at biting her ear, if it hit as planned. Once her front hoof was back on the icy ground, she held her weight there and placed her hind hoof a step back. She tested it before she moved her weight onto the hoof in a cautious step back, hoping to get a little space before he could attack again. The ground was still too slippery for any fancy movement, with most of the snow kicked up. In the split second of free time she had before the stallion began to move to her side, the mare glanced up to the sky with her good eye. The clouds had drawn so close to them and the weather had gotten worse. She knew that once the round was over and the adrenaline died down, the cold would bite into her skin again. The cold wasn't something she was a fan of. Once the stallion had moved to her side, Zana thought that maybe he was done with his attacks already. He seemed to be worse off now that she had given him a limp. The girl understood how difficult fighting could be with a limp and she almost felt badly for the pale gladiator. The cheap bite at his hock might have been a little over the top, but as the mare mused over it, she realized that he had done the same to her in the earlier round. The rare seed of sympathy that had been growing in her mind was crushed almost instantly. A sudden, sharp pain to her side reminded her that there was still a battle going on. Despite the attack, the mare was starting to get tired of the battle. She whipped her head to the side, giving an irritated snort when the movement caused blood to drip into her eye. Her opponent seemed to be truly done once his bite was done with, because he had started walking away already. The mare narrowed her good eye and then looked back to the ground under her front hooves. Carefully, she turned herself and dug her hooves into the slippery ground. She kicked up her hind hooves, trying to hit the stallion's rump or hind legs above his hock. She didn't want to hit the already damaged leg, since killing the stallion by leaving him with only three legs was not a goal of her's. It wasn't a very strong attack, but she thought it'd be enough on the already injured stallion to hurt. Her front hooves began slipping and she slammed her hind hooves back down, causing pain to shoot up from her right hock. The mare managed to keep herself upright and stabilize her balance again. The pain of her hock caused Zana to grit her teeth and raise the injured leg, dangling her hoof above the ground. The tournament had been a lot rougher than she had expected.
Status Complete Word Count 821 WE Word Counter Attacks/Hits (post 1) 1- Tried to bite his left hock to make him lame. (post 2) 2- As she moves her knee in a dodge, she tries to slam it against his previous injured jaw. 3- Tries to kick his rump or hind legs, but not his hock. (Doesn't want to make him three legged and have him die because of it.) Dodges (2/6 attacks dodged) 1- Moves her head out of the way when he tries to bite at her ear or forelock. 2- Moves her knee out of the way when he tries to bite it. Injuries in this round (Post 1) 1- Gaping bite in her neck, will bleed and be sore for weeks. 2- Bruise on her cheek as well as scrape on her neck. (Post 2) 3- Scrape across the skin above (to the side a little) her right eye. It will bruise later, but will bleed a bit because it's a facial wound. 4- Bite on her ribs, will bleed moderately and bruise, but will heal over in a week. (4.5- Her hind leg that was previously injured is acting up and in more pain now.) Personal Note log - The ear! D: *hides it* Wins/losses/ties/buy 2 Win - 0 Loss - 0 Tie - 0 Buy Tagged @birna, @misty
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Post by Deleted on Jan 23, 2015 13:28:53 GMT -7
Name- Gaeafu Breed- Swedish Warmblood x Lustino Age- 7yrs Gender- XY Height- 17hh Alliance- Dark Health- 100% mentally | 55% Physically Past injuriesRound 1. 1. Nose bleeding form a kick in the jaw. Small laceration and bruiser under his bottom lip, be painful to eat for five days. 2. Laceration across his left side of his ribcage and the skin/muscles are bruised 3. Pulled a muscle in his left hindleg from a sudden move for a attack 4. Zana ripped hair from his mane, and where she ripped is now painful to touch 5. Zana managed to hit his chest with her hooves, skin is hanging losely and moderately bleeding. Round 2. (1) Left shoulder is sore from the first attack he done (2) Lactation on his neck area, took some skin off, bleeding is moderated. Gaeafu His Injuries... I loved this round Icy!
Status Complete Word CountN/A Attacks/Hits 1. Tricked with a rear hoping catch Zana off guard, while coming down on all fours, he aimed to bite her neck, holding onto the flesh, hoping to create a gaping hole. 2. Turned around and kicked out, hoping to hit her face, chest or forelegs 3. While being bitten, he kicked out with his right foot, hoping to hit her eye or other part of her face 4. Using his height advantage he aimed a bite towards her ear hoping to tear it off, if this failed he hoped to rip some forelock hairs from their roots. 5. Risky attack towards her forelegs, hoping to lame her by biting her knees 6. Final attack along her ribs, pinching the skin hoping to cut the skin or create a nasty bruise Dodges 1. As his attack on the legs weren't successful he managed to avoid the entire blow to his mouth, instead her attack left him a thick lip Injuries in this round 1. Bite along his left hock, left him severely lame on that leg, unable to put any weight on it for at four days. 2. Thick lip after being knocked by her knees 3. Small gash on his rump, not life threatening after a kick Personal Note He is second one in my log ❅ Icy Dragon ✩ | @birna Wins/losses/ties/buy 01/01/00/00
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Post by Deleted on Feb 1, 2015 13:26:21 GMT -7
This battle is being judged
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Post by Deleted on Mar 13, 2015 11:33:22 GMT -7
Misty with Gaeafu Battle Form Completed Each Time: 20 Comments: Completed Completed No Powerplaying/Godmodding: 20 Comments: None None 1000 Words Or Less: 20 Comments: Both around 500 Yes Correct Setting: 20 Comments: Correct Realistic Attacks: 18 Comments: I felt like her attacks were repetitive slightly and there could have been more effort put into them. Needed more effort to make them truly realistic, it were attacks that could possible happen in real life horse fight but I wanted more details. Realistic Dodges: 20 Comments: None used Not needed Realistic Injuries: 20 Comments: She made sure each injury acquired was carried through each battle. Yes Spelling/Grammar: 19,5 Comments: Good but sometimes hard to follow. All right Total Score: 137,5 Icy with Zana's Rose Battle Form Completed Each Time: 20 Comments: Completed Completed No Powerplaying/Godmodding: 20 Comments: None None 1000 Words Or Less: 20 Comments: Both 700-800 Yes Correct Setting: 20 Comments: Correct All fine Realistic Attacks: 20 Comments: Attacks were well thought of. Her character went after previously injured areas in which is realistic, but also made sure not to injure areas too much so they wouldn't die, showing empathy. Very good and realistic attacks Realistic Dodges: 20 Comments: Realistic. Yes they were all good Realistic Injuries: 20 Comments: Small and large injuries mixed together. Injuries were mentioned and they were all realistic Spelling/Grammar: 19,5 Comments: Good but was sometimes a little hard to follow. Nothing that stood out. Total Score: 139,5 CONGRATS TO Zana's Rose played by ❅ Icy Dragon ✩ for winning this round!
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